雅思写作知识点分析(第106期)

2021年9月17日浏览:0来源:新航道官网

      An increasing number of developing countries are expanding their tourist industry.

  Why do you think it is the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

  应对上面这个题目,考生在主体段有一句是这么写的:

  Despite the economic reasons, there is another reason for national reputation.

  ※ 这句话是主段的第二个分论点,起头介绍第二个原因。

  改写如下

  Economic reasons aside, there is another reason: to enhance the national reputation.

  解析:

  despite 介词,“虽然,尽管”,表示虽可能有其他障碍,但这件事还是成真了。例:Despite applying for hundreds of jobs, he is still out of work.

  分析原因时,这两个原因基本属于并列或递进关系,所以改写成economic reasons aside, “抛开经济原因不提”。

  reason 常见的搭配有:

  reason for … 某情况发生的理由,如reason for her decision她所做决定的理由

   reason why … 某情况发生的理由,reason why you’re so late你迟到这么久的理由

  原句中,国家的名声已经是原因本身了,所以改用冒号解释说明reason。