12月5日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 政府应该多加投资理科吗?

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  2020年12月5日 雅思大作文题目

  More government investment should be on the teaching of science than any other subjects in order to keep a country’s development and progress.

  To what extent do you agree or disagree?

  (重复2016年1月9日)

12月5日雅思大作文真题参考范文 | 政府应该多加投资理科吗?

  范文及解析

  01、Can you imagine a world without science? That must be unthinkable for any country. Should science subjects then be the only focus of government investment in education? I can hardly endorse this.

  解析

  起:问句铺垫背景,再起问句推出立场。

  02、To achieve an appreciable national prosperity, science education could not be more important. It is believed that with more funds invested in these curricula, there would be morein-houseelites in the fields of electronics, telecommunication, robotics, medicine, to name but a few. Who these elites are, are meritorious people to European countries and the United States in industrial revolutions, helping them leapfrog rungs on the development ladder. Besides, well-educated people on science, in most cases, are more visionary, who are more likely to be participative in the development of their nation.

  解析

  承:肯定the teaching of science的合理之处

  论证:举例印证理科人才对典型的贡献

  03、However, for advance to happen, the investment on other subjects must also go hand in hand. This is because pragmatically speaking, arts and humanities can also offer benefits to a country, tangible or intangible, culturally or artistically. Without History, a subject introducing past achievements, how could the sense of belonging be strengthened and thus the country be united? And without designers, the face of a city would be a mess. At this point, all liberal arts disciplines, as the basic requisites, instill sound values in citizens and equip them with abilities to perfect the country.

  解析

  转:本段扣准“其他学科与发展进步”

  论证:反面烘托文史哲学科的必要性

  04、In light of the above, with science disciplines, indeed, a country can harvest huge benefits. However, if government funds went to them exclusively, the country would not develop in an all-round way. To avoid this, it is strongly discouraged to exclude subjects of liberal arts and humanities from the national investment list.

  解析

  合:总结全篇内容,立场清晰